Star Trek Fan 0 Posted June 4, 2004 I was in the shower yesterday watdhing the water crawl down the sides of the shower, and that was my inspiration. The poem just flowed out... A poem by Commodore -Harry Kim- Water Water What is water? Is water just one atom of Oxygen and two atoms of Hydrogen? Or is water more? When water falls from the sky, I am relaxed. When water pours in the shower, I am clean. When water crashes down as a wave, I swim. But water is just one atom of Oxygen and two atoms of Hydrogen. Or is water more? When water leaks through the ceiling, I am frusturated. When water is hot, I am burned. When water rushes down my face, I am saddened.:( But water is only one atom of Oxygen and two atoms of Hydrogen. Or is water more? When water is no more, I cannot drink, clean, wash, swim, relax, weep, or live. Over 90% of me is water. But what am I? Am I mainly just only one atom of Oxygen and two atoms of Hydrogen? Or am I more? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Q stole my bike 0 Posted June 4, 2004 Nice poem. If I et the courage to I may post some of my poetry. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Jeanway 0 Posted June 4, 2004 Hey Harry. I wrote a poem called 'The Dream' should I post it? :( It's kind of ecclesiastical though. Aww, never mind. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites