ARMS 0 Posted April 19, 2007 When the sky comes crashing down, who lifts your frown. When there's a storm, whose keeping you warm? Lightning strikes, thunder claps, lights a fire, what mishaps? are you calling me a liar? The Earth shakes, a fight's born, link's worn, feeling torn, can't go through it again, the ground breaks, I can't take this, restless, need to get away, to safety, I'll say you made me, looking on the horizon, someone I had my eyes on. When the land crumbles from beneath you, let go of her hand, and swim to an island you thought would save you, sinks you. Criticism welcome. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lady Britannia 0 Posted April 19, 2007 When the sky comes crashing down, who lifts your frown.When there's a storm, whose keeping you warm? Lightning strikes, thunder claps, lights a fire, what mishaps? are you calling me a liar? The Earth shakes, a fight's born, link's worn, feeling torn, can't go through it again, the ground breaks, I can't take this, restless, need to get away, to safety, I'll say you made me, looking on the horizon, someone I had my eyes on. When the land crumbles from beneath you, let go of her hand, and swim to an island you thought would save you, sinks you. Criticism welcome. That's nice work. In uncertain times, I find "truth" to be the most comforting thing. To know "why" something happened and what can be learned from it brings a soothing element with it. I like things to make sense. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ARMS 0 Posted April 19, 2007 When the sky comes crashing down, who lifts your frown.When there's a storm, whose keeping you warm? Lightning strikes, thunder claps, lights a fire, what mishaps? are you calling me a liar? The Earth shakes, a fight's born, link's worn, feeling torn, can't go through it again, the ground breaks, I can't take this, restless, need to get away, to safety, I'll say you made me, looking on the horizon, someone I had my eyes on. When the land crumbles from beneath you, let go of her hand, and swim to an island you thought would save you, sinks you. Criticism welcome. That's nice work. In uncertain times, I find "truth" to be the most comforting thing. To know "why" something happened and what can be learned from it brings a soothing element with it. I like things to make sense. Thanks. I find truth disturbing though.. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lady Britannia 0 Posted April 19, 2007 Truth can indeed be disturbing, but a disturbing truth is better than a comforting lie, IMO. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Gummy 0 Posted April 19, 2007 It sounds like a song from "Live" Lightening Crashes.... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ARMS 0 Posted April 19, 2007 It sounds like a song from "Live" Lightening Crashes.... What does that go like? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Gummy 0 Posted April 19, 2007 It sounds like a song from "Live" Lightening Crashes.... What does that go like? Google the lyrics. And see if there isn't some similarities. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
He Who Shall Not Be Named 2 Posted April 20, 2007 Maybe the words and phrases are similar, but the meaning is way different. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites