Capt_Picard 0 Posted July 4, 2006 and see a news bit I did. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Trekmachine 0 Posted July 4, 2006 Looks good to me :thumbup: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
He Who Shall Not Be Named 2 Posted July 4, 2006 Maybe you could get a job on KOMO news replacing Ken Schram. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Capt_Picard 0 Posted July 4, 2006 Maybe you could get a job on KOMO news replacing Ken Schram. Well... I'm not a commentator like Mr. Schram. I report news or weather. I do not give my opinion on a topic unless asked or see the need of it. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
youbroughtheryouRiker 2 Posted July 5, 2006 A bit rushed, but I think nerves played a factor. Other than that, well done. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kor37 9 Posted July 5, 2006 You should have worn your Trek uniform..................... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Capt_Picard 0 Posted July 6, 2006 You should have worn your Trek uniform..................... Why would I do that? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
trekz 7 Posted July 6, 2006 Nice job! I agree with YBHYR that it seemed a bit rushed, though that may just be staying within your time limit. I liked it! Will you be getting a chance to do more news? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mj 7 Posted July 8, 2006 I think it was a good effort. The composition was very good. In the brief 33 seconds, you showed us a picture of the young man ( Mr. Devon Gibbons) as himself, then a picture with his family, and then a couple pictures as a soldier. A young man with family ties who was part of a military unit. You pointed out that he died later of injuries that instantly killed his fellow soldiers, as those pictures ran. Then you told that many appreciated his sacrifice as you showed someone with a hand-made sign with an American flag, acknowledging the young hero. Without being preachy you reported on and honored the soldier's self sacrifice, and the fact that family and the communtiy will miss him. It is true that you spoken words seemed a little rushed, and some words were unclear. I am not sure what city the young man was from, for instance. But overall, it was a very nice presentation. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
