removed 0 Posted July 12, 2003 Ok. This is my first attempt at fan fiction. I've only done the two parts of the story, but i will add on. I rather like how it starts off, but writting is not my best area. Lol. It's a Next Generation story. Be kind. Lol. Star Trek: Amnesia Enjoy. And honestly tell me what you think. I can handle a little creative criticism. (And Bevfank, you inspired this fan fiction with yours, Star Trek Journeys. Thanks Bev! :huh: ) (And VBG, sorry I 'borrowed' your star background. Don't hurt me. Lol.) Thanks everybody. --Chris Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
removed 0 Posted July 13, 2003 Part three is now up. Here is a direct link to Part Three or you can start from the beginning with this: Star Trek: Amnesia Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
removed 0 Posted July 19, 2003 I've completed Part Four. Here is a direct link to Part Four or you can start from the beginning with this: Star Trek: Amnesia Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Syperphobia 0 Posted August 18, 2003 I do not care for much about FanFic, I leave it up to the professional writers, but what you got seems alright. I just wish more people will do original ideas, like I am doing. My project was suggested to be posted here, but I want to keep it highly classified as it can offend majorty of readers, the topics and themes are above what the normal Science Fiction you would consider to be Trek, Andromeda, Matrix, Star Wars (although I consider this to be fantasy).... I guess, I will be able to work out the knicks and crannies out on my own, I have currently over 400 pages, and think I am getting to the end of the first phase of my epic. Anyway, to all writers like yourself, TREK ON!!!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
removed 0 Posted September 17, 2003 Anyway, to all writers like yourself, TREK ON!!!! thanks for the encouragment. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Captain Ericks 0 Posted December 8, 2003 Not bad at all. B) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Captain Bolivar 0 Posted December 8, 2003 (edited) Hey I really liked it! I liked how it wasn't all dialogue but instead it was based on events and descriptions. Really made you feel like you were there. Good stuff! PM me when part 5 is ready please!!! B) Edited December 8, 2003 by Captain Bolivar Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
trekzone 0 Posted December 9, 2003 well done Bysty! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
removed 0 Posted December 10, 2003 Thanks everyone. I've never really liked the regular fan-format where it acts almost like a script. I read alot of books, and I really like that style, so figured I'd use it for my fan-fic. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
A l t e r E g o 9 Posted December 10, 2003 Well it's a good job bysty and you have me hooked into reading what happens next, more please. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
removed 0 Posted December 10, 2003 I'll do my best to do more. (I still have reviews to do though, AE. lol) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
A l t e r E g o 9 Posted December 10, 2003 Understood! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
