enigmatic_mystery 0 Posted September 30, 2004 Hi again!! ^.^; I had written this Prose about a week or so ago and posted it on Fanfiction.com but I am going to put it up here also. Please tell me what you think and if you have any Proses or even Poems you can put them up here and we'll all tell eachother what we think. Here is mine, it is called Scars of a Wartorn Ravaged Land. That day…. That day my children came to me… Was the happiest day of my life I changed, for the better I held my crying son and Named him Caine I held my smiling daughter and Named her Kerry I gazed lovingly at my wife I watched… I watched as my children grew… As they learned to hunt… I comforted my children… When they cried… When they where scared… That day… That day when those terrorists knocked down the towers… I cried… I held my children and cried with them… That day Caine shipped out… I worried… I looked at my daughter and worried… That day… That day when Caine died at the barrel of a gun… I cursed God for taking my only son… I held my daughter and cried with her… That day… That day when Kerry called for revenge… I ordered her….to stay… I pleaded with her…not to go… That day when Kerry shipped out… I cried… I screamed… That day when they took my last strong hold, my darling daughter…. I screamed at the sky… I died… I asked why? Dracula raised his head and looked at the pink tinged sky, with a blood-tear stained face. “These are the scars of a war torn ravaged land.” I really don't know where it came from just that something moved me to write it and so I obayed becasue it is not often that I write Proses or poems, just stories. So if you want to attack me about it go right on because I am immune. *Puts up anti-flame sheild* Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Eris_IV 0 Posted September 30, 2004 I like it, I like most 'dark' poems/proses...Almost sounds like lyrics to a song that Lacuna Coil would sing...almost. Are you going to post more? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
enigmatic_mystery 0 Posted September 30, 2004 (edited) Oops....I misspelled that band in another post. Thank you :P I am posting nore lol. This is one of the first ones that I wrote that is on my computer it is called: Loved and Lost. Hollow…. Cold and soulless Heartless…. Unfeeling and demonic “For someone so heartless you sure have a big one.” Just for that moment…. I felt…emotion…warmth…a pulse Just for that second…. My heart beat again Just for that second…. Warmth rushed through my veins Just for that second…. I grieved Monster…. Feared and hated Demon…. Revered and hunted “No one’s pure evil…just a little lost.” Nosferatu…. Dark and seductive Dracula dropped a single rose in front of a small weathered head stone. Here lies Miss Trinity Cosraff. Born: 1800 Died: 1830 You gave light to places that where dark and you could change a heart even if it was made of stone. He drew in a shuddering breath and turned. “Have you ever loved and lost?” Here is another one this time in the point of veiw of the person Dracula is moarning above and it is obviously about the Count. ^.^; Called: Not so Soulless After all. You say that you are Cold and soulless inside But when I look into your eyes I see…. You have a soul after all And that’s not all You have a heart too One that beats like a drum With the fiery intensity of a thousand suns. When I look into your eyes I see your human side So very deep down inside of you While you may scream That you have no emotion That you are cold and hollow I alone know the truth. When I touch your face My hand is warmed If I where to die right now I know you would call out My name till the skies grew gray. You would feel the pain of loss Because deep down you still human. You’re just a trapped soul Calling for revenge and blood. But I know the truth That there is still some Shred of humanity left in you I see…. That you have a soul after all. And this one was my very first one that I wrote and it was and still is meant to be a song, I just need to work out the melody and stuff. ._.; Called: Walking in My Shoes. Walking in my shoes You’ll never understand the things that I do Till you take a walk in my shoes Living every day in a haze Just walking in my shoes I am hollow… My life was just a phase Movin onto bigger and better things Walking in my shoes Is like loosing all feeling Becoming cold and hollow Immune to all the pains Of life and death I feel no fear, no love, no joy Walking in my shoes Just walking in my shoes No one can understand The things I do They haven’t walked in my shoes I am hollow Cold and soulless You will be too Once you’ve walked in my shoes Walking in my shoes Just…walking…. in…my…. shoes. Edited October 1, 2004 by enigmatic_mystery Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Jeanway 0 Posted October 2, 2004 Those were beautiful e_m. Sorry I forgot to start you know what. Just slipped my mind, I fear. But here's a little make-up gift for you. Do you think he's cute? :) Would he make a cute little cuddly toy? :lol: Just kidding. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
enigmatic_mystery 0 Posted October 2, 2004 Yes. Lol, he would make a neat little plushie But seriously its ok. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
