sea trooper's poetry

[sea trooper 0]

Since I write poetry, I would like to share them all (4) with everyone here. Consider that an honor, just 'cause I like you all :huh:

 

Now somewhat of a warning, my poetry is pretty dark. My friends call me a "Morbid Dr. Seuss"

 

Here is my first ever poem:

 

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The anger swelling

The hate compelling

Can't trust me anymore

When I knock at your door

All the pain inside

All the pain still resides

You run for your life

The chase is my life

You hide in the deep

I change while I creep

I change from the pain

I change from humane

You see me, you run

I smile if it's fun

You increase your pace

But I'm all over the place

You don't see me anymore

But you still hear my roar

You're lost in the brush

But you still keep your rush

Now there's no trace of me

So you fall to your knee

But that was a mistake

'Cause you'll soon feel my wake

You feel something from behind coming on

But it's too late, you are already gone.

 

My second poem:

 

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I'm running all over the place

Running not to see it's face

To survive I have to run

Catching me is all it's fun

I cannot stay here, I have to flee

If I stay it will get me

Running, trees, road, town

Blood all over, encrusted brown

It has been here, I'm the only one

Have to keep going, have to run

Running, corpses everywhere

Bloody clothes, skin, hair

This will not happen, it's not my fate

I will not be what this monster ate

Out of the town, into the wood

I would keep running if I could

I'm tired, I can no longer run

But if I stay here, I am done

Kneeling there I thought of something

While thinking it my heart stopped pumping

Blood on my hands and on my face

Yet there is no wound any place

Shocked at first, but now I see

Horrified, the monster is me.

 

My third poem:

 

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"Send him to Hell!" I say

To Hell they take him away

If I want something, I will get it

If I don't you will all regret it

"Where is my food?" I yell out loud

They bring it into my darkened shroud

"None for you and all for me!"

I say again, again with glee

Slaves crawl beneath my feet in fear

They cover their ears so as not to hear

If I want something, I will get it

If I don't you will all regret it

Running, hiding, screaming in pain

Running, hiding, screaming from my reign

You're all ants! I'm the power

I yell from my hundred foot tower

Ruling the world, I stand tall

More than the world, I rule all

Waking up from my mind

I see that I have fallen behind

Running up or I'll get hurt

Master is screaming, back to work

 

My latest poem (I wrote today):

 

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She's dead.

That's said.

Now what?

So what?

So why?

Now cry?

Are tears?

Or fears?

My knife.

Her life.

They're mine

Not fine.

But why?

You lie!

That man.

Your plan.

My love.

No love.

You lie.

You die.

I cry.

I die.

Her knife.

My life.

We're dead.

That's said.

 

Please tell me what you like, don't like, think needs improvment, and please don't call my poetry "nice" :wink2:

Edited September 8, 2004 by sea trooper

[Airies 0]

Well, I would give you my opinion, but my stupid work pc won't let me see spoilers I can't! Makes me mad! :huh: :crybaby:

[sea trooper 0]

Oh. Then just hit the

button under my post and it will show them all to you.

[Jeanway 0]

UHH, UMMM :huh:

[sea trooper 0]

You like it! I told you it was dark :huh:

[Jeanway 0]

Well, Um, UH, it's not my cup of tea, but it has merit. :huh:

[T'pol_1 0]

I like 'em. I used to write beautiful poetry but someone threw them away :huh:

[sea trooper 0]

Thanks T'Pol. Sorry about your poetry. If it were me I would have hunted them down.

 

There's a poetry contest in school this month and I'm gonna enter Poem 4 in the drama category, and Poem 2 in the Narrative category. I'm very excited...

[Wishfire 2]

I thought they were pretty good, though I'm not a big fan of rhyming poetry. I think rhymes are too cliche, so my poems rarely ever rhyme.

 

Hey, have you ever though of submitting them to www.poetry.com? It's free, and you can enter in a poetry contest there, as well. Even if you don't, hey, it's a way to get your poetry out there.

 

If you want to see the kind of poetry I like, I'll post one of my old poems in my personal log.

[sea trooper 0]

My fifth poem!

 

The day falls and the darkness reside

The night comes and the evils colide

The dawn shines while the hatred dwells

The morning's bright but the darkness swells

The noon is dim with a sterile stain

The night beckons and it begins again

 

It's shorter than my other ones though.

[LordOfTheBorg 1]

Nice(for all poems)

[Angel of Darkness 0]

SeaTrooper said don't call them nice lol

 

I like them :jem'hadar: