sea trooper 0 Posted September 8, 2004 (edited) Since I write poetry, I would like to share them all (4) with everyone here. Consider that an honor, just 'cause I like you all :huh: Now somewhat of a warning, my poetry is pretty dark. My friends call me a "Morbid Dr. Seuss" Here is my first ever poem: Click For Spoiler The anger swelling The hate compelling Can't trust me anymore When I knock at your door All the pain inside All the pain still resides You run for your life The chase is my life You hide in the deep I change while I creep I change from the pain I change from humane You see me, you run I smile if it's fun You increase your pace But I'm all over the place You don't see me anymore But you still hear my roar You're lost in the brush But you still keep your rush Now there's no trace of me So you fall to your knee But that was a mistake 'Cause you'll soon feel my wake You feel something from behind coming on But it's too late, you are already gone. My second poem: Click For Spoiler I'm running all over the place Running not to see it's face To survive I have to run Catching me is all it's fun I cannot stay here, I have to flee If I stay it will get me Running, trees, road, town Blood all over, encrusted brown It has been here, I'm the only one Have to keep going, have to run Running, corpses everywhere Bloody clothes, skin, hair This will not happen, it's not my fate I will not be what this monster ate Out of the town, into the wood I would keep running if I could I'm tired, I can no longer run But if I stay here, I am done Kneeling there I thought of something While thinking it my heart stopped pumping Blood on my hands and on my face Yet there is no wound any place Shocked at first, but now I see Horrified, the monster is me. My third poem: Click For Spoiler "Send him to Hell!" I say To Hell they take him away If I want something, I will get it If I don't you will all regret it "Where is my food?" I yell out loud They bring it into my darkened shroud "None for you and all for me!" I say again, again with glee Slaves crawl beneath my feet in fear They cover their ears so as not to hear If I want something, I will get it If I don't you will all regret it Running, hiding, screaming in pain Running, hiding, screaming from my reign You're all ants! I'm the power I yell from my hundred foot tower Ruling the world, I stand tall More than the world, I rule all Waking up from my mind I see that I have fallen behind Running up or I'll get hurt Master is screaming, back to work My latest poem (I wrote today): Click For Spoiler She's dead. That's said. Now what? So what? So why? Now cry? Are tears? Or fears? My knife. Her life. They're mine Not fine. But why? You lie! That man. Your plan. My love. No love. You lie. You die. I cry. I die. Her knife. My life. We're dead. That's said. Please tell me what you like, don't like, think needs improvment, and please don't call my poetry "nice" :wink2: Edited September 8, 2004 by sea trooper Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Airies 0 Posted September 8, 2004 Well, I would give you my opinion, but my stupid work pc won't let me see spoilers I can't! Makes me mad! :huh: :crybaby: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sea trooper 0 Posted September 8, 2004 Oh. Then just hit the button under my post and it will show them all to you. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sea trooper 0 Posted September 8, 2004 You like it! I told you it was dark :huh: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Jeanway 0 Posted September 8, 2004 Well, Um, UH, it's not my cup of tea, but it has merit. :huh: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
T'pol_1 0 Posted September 8, 2004 I like 'em. I used to write beautiful poetry but someone threw them away :huh: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sea trooper 0 Posted November 10, 2004 Thanks T'Pol. Sorry about your poetry. If it were me I would have hunted them down. There's a poetry contest in school this month and I'm gonna enter Poem 4 in the drama category, and Poem 2 in the Narrative category. I'm very excited... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Wishfire 2 Posted November 11, 2004 I thought they were pretty good, though I'm not a big fan of rhyming poetry. I think rhymes are too cliche, so my poems rarely ever rhyme. Hey, have you ever though of submitting them to www.poetry.com? It's free, and you can enter in a poetry contest there, as well. Even if you don't, hey, it's a way to get your poetry out there. If you want to see the kind of poetry I like, I'll post one of my old poems in my personal log. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sea trooper 0 Posted February 22, 2005 My fifth poem! The day falls and the darkness reside The night comes and the evils colide The dawn shines while the hatred dwells The morning's bright but the darkness swells The noon is dim with a sterile stain The night beckons and it begins again It's shorter than my other ones though. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
LordOfTheBorg 1 Posted February 22, 2005 Nice(for all poems) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Angel of Darkness 0 Posted February 23, 2005 SeaTrooper said don't call them nice lol I like them :jem'hadar: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites