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Jim Phaserman

Fall Of The Federation?

Would you be interested in reading a fan fic about the fall of the Federation?  

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  1. 1. Would you be interested in reading a fan fic about the fall of the Federation?

    • Yes
      13
    • No
      6
    • The Federation will fall? Are you Nuts!?!
      6
    • What goes up must come down--sure!
      7


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Personally, I don't want to see the Federation fall. You should keep in mind that the Federation can't fall until after the 29th century as evidenced in Future's End.

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Click the spoiler below for the basic plot outline

 

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the plot is that the Federation is on the verge of a Civil war that will rip it apart. it involves some of Star Trek's greatest heros, and might well spell the end for at least one of them.

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I think that sounds like a great idea, of course, it might be hard for me fully appericate it, I mean, the Federation could NEVER fall with the USS Dysfunct on their side!

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LOL! :drool: That is a very interesting plotline Jim. Perhaps take some type of incident like in Insurrection.

Edited by Beam me up

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It depends on the century, reason, and end result. All great nations rise and fall. If it's so you can tell a "dark and edgy" story of a "doom and gloom" future, no thanks. If it's to remind us that great civilizations rise and fall, and that a new and better civilization or organization will replace the UFP, then I'd be interrested and intruiged. So, what is your purpose in writing the fan-fic? I'm not asking you to spoil it or anything, just what you're trying to accomplish with the story.

 

Example:

Voyager's ultimate goal, I believe, was to tell action-oriented stories about a lone ship on the other side of the galaxy, fighting to survive and find a faster way home.

 

A statement like the above example would be great for me to understand your intention. After that, I'll place my vote and explain why. :laugh:

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It depends on the century, reason, and end result.  All great nations rise and fall.  If it's so you can tell a "dark and edgy" story of a "doom and gloom" future, no thanks.  If it's to remind us that great civilizations rise and fall, and that a new and better civilization or organization will replace the UFP, then I'd be interrested and intruiged.  So, what is your purpose in writing the fan-fic?  I'm not asking you to spoil it or anything, just what you're trying to accomplish with the story.

 

Example:

Voyager's ultimate goal, I believe, was to tell action-oriented stories about a lone ship on the other side of the galaxy, fighting to survive and find a faster way home.

 

A statement like the above example would be great for me to understand your intention.  After that, I'll place my vote and explain why. :laugh:

the basic idea, CJLP, is about part of the Federation being unhappy with policies and such...basically a set up similar to the American Civil War. the issue isn't slavery, but it is, nonetheless, an important issue. the federation ends up divided, and a civil war ensues. ther basic premise being a house divided against itself cannot stand. as the title suggests, the Federation will fall. what rises to take its place may be better or worse.

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I'm interested in why I get sent to the STF purgatory, everytime I click on one of your links. For some reason everytime I click on your posts I'm transferred to STF's password recovery section. It's bizarre.

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this is not even close to complete, but you can downlaod what I have so far here.

That sounds good, just don't use the word read in a story. It's a little redundant. :P

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I'm hooked already! When's the next instalment?

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Interesting could u give us a little more idea into what u got planned for the might federations withdrawal from the galactic scene?

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well, the setting is 10 years after the end of the Dominion War, and the Federation is split, so the Federation and the Confederacy will basically have a fight to the death. whatever replaces the Federation will be stronger, no doubt. but how it all works...well, you'll just have to read.

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