First attempt at a Fan Fic

[Spork 0]

follow the link:

http://www.geocities.com/spot6789/

 

my first fan fic, so be kind... B)

 

not the complete story, just so you know. :)

and a title is still being thought up.

 

Oops. wrong sections. realized after i hit submit. Sorry!

Edited May 23, 2003 by Spork

[Lubak10 0]

This is awsome! :) You have some serious talent! :)

Keep writing, I want to find out what happens. You should post it at fanfiction.net

[Spork 0]

This is awsome! :) You have some serious talent! :)

Keep writing, I want to find out what happens.  You should post it at fanfiction.net

Thanks! I really appreciate your comment. :)

 

I've updated the story. heres the link again:

 

Updated story

 

Please feel free to critique it to heck or give me comments... its only way i can improve on my writing skills.

[Xeroc 0]

Nice Writing! Keep up the good work!

[jdigs 0]

Wow! Thats quite a talent you've got, keep it up!

[jeanlucPicard00 0]

Anything that makes me feel, I like! You inspired an emotional responce, in such a short time.

I was courious...Angry...Sad....and proud. Thank you.

[Spork 0]

Thanks for all your comments. the continuation is coming soon..just working out some plot points.

[hellsgate 0]

I loved the story. great detail! Can't wait to see your other work. Here's a place to visit if you want illustrations. Branch out away from Sovereign-Class & Defiant-Class starships & use more original vessels.

 

http://www.angelfire.com/ak4/startrekfanfi...troduction.html

[roguedawg 0]

Keep up with your writing.Its a great way to pass time.I write my own trek fiction,but am much too big of a coward to let anybody read it.Maybe one of these days....

[captainfreeman 0]

You are a very talented writer.Keep it up.I myself have written my own TNG-era Trek stories for better than a decade now.One of these days,I'll post something for everybody.I write about Captain John Henry Armstrong (a combination of the names of two of my childhood heroes...John Henry and Neil Armstrong) and the crew of the starship Kilimanjaro.Originally the Kilimanjaro was an Excelsior-class starship,but it did not survive the final weeks of the Dominion War.I wrote a ton of stories set during the war,and distinguished my favorite ship and crew (and myself,I guess,as I have always seen myself as John Henry Armstrong).The post-Dominion War USS Kilimanjaro is an Asimov-class explorer.My latest storyline has placed the Kilimanjaro on a deep-space exploration assignment (originally I had called the unexplored region the Sargasso Expanse...so named because of a particularly beautiful nebula,the Sargasso nebula,that occupied that space.But after Enterprise aired the Expanse,I changed the name to the "Starry Reach" after the painting Starry night).I figure the crew deserves a reward for putting up with my gruesome battle tales.

Well,I'll log off for the night here.I'll catch you all later!Goodnight.